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Falling to pieces
The world breaks around
While frozen there silent
Your heart makes no sound

A ray of light shining
The clouds breaking above
A flutter, a whisper
The feeling of love

The ray shining brighter
Your feet breaking free
Your eyes coming open
Beginning to see

Warm arms surround you
A nuzzle, a kiss
Completely engulfed
By this feeling of bliss

Arms reaching upward
Toward the light in the sky
Tears of joy falling
Beginning to fly
:iconchaos-fate-angel:

Author's Comments

Well i wrote this thinking about a certain topic. And when I reread it and added to it I thought another topic. And when I finally finished it it was a totally new and different topic. So yeah I want you to decide what YOU think its about and comment with that along with any proactive criticism :D. Please and thank you :D

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:icondarksilverblade:
*Thinks*

I don't know what it could be about, but I like it anyhow.

*Pat-pats*

Such a good puppy!

--
Sail away where no ball and chain
Can keep us from the roarin' waves
Together undivided but forever we'll be free
So sail away aboard our rig
The moon is full and so are we
Seven drunken pirates
We're the seven deadly sins --Flogging Molly
:iconchibi-chise-chan:
It does seem like it can be taken many different ways, and to each their own opinion in my mind. I found it lovely and evocative, simplistic to the point that it needs nothing else to get its point across. Very well done.

--
<So What by Pink>
So so what?
I'm still a rock star
I got my rock moves
And i don't need you
And guess what
I'm having more fun
And now that we're done
I'm gonna show you tonight
:iconchaos-fate-angel:
*pantpant*

--
I wish I had a boyfriend named Awesome so I could say I'm fucking awesome.

Enough expository banter! Now we fight like men! And ladies! And ladies who dress like men! For Gilgamesh...it is morphing time!- Gilgamesh/Final Fantasy V
:iconchaos-fate-angel:
Thank ya kindly *I MISS YOU D:*

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I wish I had a boyfriend named Awesome so I could say I'm fucking awesome.

Enough expository banter! Now we fight like men! And ladies! And ladies who dress like men! For Gilgamesh...it is morphing time!- Gilgamesh/Final Fantasy V
:iconchibi-chise-chan:
*I miss you too!!!!!* And you are very welcome.

--
<So What by Pink>
So so what?
I'm still a rock star
I got my rock moves
And i don't need you
And guess what
I'm having more fun
And now that we're done
I'm gonna show you tonight

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